Poetic Rivers

Inspired by a mini-movie put together by Victoria Ellis of river scenes and quotes, Year 8 put together a short poem reflecting their emotions about rivers. We’d appreciate your feedback, and, if willing, your location.

Molly

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Luke

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Ryan

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Tash

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7 Comments

  1. Posted September 22, 2011 at 8:36 pm | Permalink

    Really enjoyed the river poems year 8.

    All the best

    Noel (Somerset)

  2. Victoria Ellis
    Posted September 22, 2011 at 9:28 pm | Permalink

    These are brilliant – I especially liked Ryan’s work. (And it’s nice to see that my movie is being used!).

    Victoria (Swanwick, Derbyshire).

  3. Posted September 22, 2011 at 10:27 pm | Permalink

    I really loved your river poems,
    Nice rhythm and concise,
    A good degree of content shown
    To which I’ve listened twice.
    I like the links to flooding
    And to a rivers energy,
    And further how its using
    These to shape it constantly.

    Your poetry beats mine, that was hard! Well done, yr8 🙂

  4. Posted September 22, 2011 at 10:45 pm | Permalink

    How does the cycle start again at the sea Ryan?

  5. Posted September 22, 2011 at 10:50 pm | Permalink

    Lots of great adjectives used in your poems to describe a river. Great work Year 8! I look forward to more of your work.

  6. Mr. Parkinson
    Posted September 23, 2011 at 9:42 am | Permalink

    Well done to everyone who produced a poem in Mr. Cassidy’s lesson. Rivers flow like the words in a poem, and you’ve painted some nice pictures in words here. Exciting !

  7. Tony_Cassidy
    Posted September 25, 2011 at 9:07 am | Permalink

    Thanks for all your comments

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